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How to Write a Screenplay
18 STEPS TO A COMPLETED SCREENPLAY
STEP 17
POLISH CHARACTERS’ “VOICES”
After you have rewritten the script to your satisfaction, make one more pass to your work on each character individually. Make sure each “voice”—both as to the kinds of things the character says and the manner in which they speak—is consistent and unique. Aim for dialogue that defines the characters, so that a reader could pick up on who is talking without dialogue cues.
STEP 18
THE LAST STEP: POLISH THE LANGUAGE
Before you let any professional read your script, meticulously proofread the script for typos and polish the language. Take out every unnecessary word. Deliberate over every sentence to make sure “the read” is as effortless as possible. Challenge yourself to tighten every 3-line paragraph into a 2-line paragraph. Writers often submit scripts that would easily be 20 pages shorter had they simply tightened and polished their language.
Some writers devalue this part of the process as a mechanical exercise that is merely editing. However, when you pay attention to every single word, the eloquence function begins to seep over into your storytelling. Suddenly you must find a better verb, a more concise description, or you must eliminate the clutter that will distract and stop a reader from experiencing a great moment in the story.
Make certain you study the Screenplay Format Guide site on CS Web, and purchase Robert Flaxman's Seducing The Studio Reader DVD.
Skipping this step prevents many potentially great writers from achieving their goal of recognition. Whether screenwriting is a hobby or a career, take this step seriously as a sign that you take yourself seriously as a writer. HOME | BACK | MORE HOW TO WRITE A SCREENPLAY
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